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she could have been a violin;

born a week too late, she had
melancholy in her bones: doctor lizbet
took time out of her schedule to pluck her
newborn strings - calloused sanitation against
mottled pink-and-yellow flesh & thrashing limbs.

in three more years, she will have
nothing in her bones at all: doctor estair
diagnosed her with iatrophobia to fuel her
instinctive chords - ripple-free shells of liquid
lobotomy & a capsule to callous her pink-and-yellow
flesh against the thought of just getting over it all.

ten years after that, her mother will
find her face down and thrashing: her dust
bunny bones will flex as she retches up her memories
for display - lawyers will spend the next few years pawing
through them with clawed hands and heaving breathing until
one day, they find lizbet and estair huddled amid the rubble of her bones.
I would appreciate any thoughts or opinions you may have.

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Collaboration with the lovely *Rainyhawaii who found this scrap [link] and decided it was worth working on with me. :heart:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE THE WORD CHOICE AND FLOW! Well-done. The picture painted is beautiful~
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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Mattiello Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Professional Writer
This really is quite amazing!  
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014   Writer
Thank you.
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Mattiello Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Professional Writer
No problem. :D
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MatieuCanadaWilliams Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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chancerox Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love the idea of dust bunny bones :) 
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013   Writer
It conjures a pretty image, I think.
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chancerox Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it really does. gets you thinking about the fragility of oneself 
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013   Writer
:nod:
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