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To a Father,

 

please, don't bury her. she is afraid of the dark.

 

From a Mother.

I would appreciate any thoughts or opinions you may have.
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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Burying her would definitely stink, literally or otherwise
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014   Writer
Indeed.
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:iconcality:
cality Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is a piece that definitely makes one think; the potential meanings of 'bury' are intriguing to consider.  
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner May 4, 2014   Writer
:)
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:iconladybrookecelebwen:
LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so wonderfully chilling and sad. :)
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014   Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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:iconladybrookecelebwen:
LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Chilling, wow.
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Writer
:nod:
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:iconchromeantennae:
chromeantennae Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:iconchasing-taxis:
chasing-taxis Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
:iconpapcryplz:
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014   Writer
:heart:
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Azzaneth Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
This is so short and yet filled with so much - proof that quality trumps quantity. Really great job. Clap 
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much! :love:
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:iconazzaneth:
Azzaneth Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
No problem. ^^
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That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful~

Fathers can usually be quite naive with their daughters, trying to control them this way and that. But mothers understand their daughters more, and approach the daughter's situation with kindness.
(I really wouldn't know, but that's a story for another time :) )

Anyway, I love this. Great job <3
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much. Caramel dansen emote 
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:iconthat1personyouforgot:
That1PersonYouForgot Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome c: :w00t:
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
:heart:
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muscularteeth Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
wow. there are so many ways to interpret this. it's a great piece of open-ended literature. very powerful. 
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:iconintroverted-ghost:
introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much. :blush:
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:iconadrolyn:
Adrolyn Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is brilliant.  I have lived this.
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014   Writer
Thank you. :blush:
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